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My Thoughts:
This was an interesting take on Werewolves. I enjoyed the quick start, with the Werewolves being caged, drugged and hidden from society. The hierarchy of the wolves in the prison was interesting and extremely detailed. In fact, everything after the beginning was extremely detailed. For me, it was too much detail and I was a bit lost (read bored), however, I also hate Stephan King and Anne Rice for that same reason and they're vastly popular. I think that if you like Werewolves and are interested in a new, remarkably detailed story regarding them, this is the book for you. Here's a sneak peak of the first chapter.
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Genre: Paranormal/Dystopian/New Adult
Chapter 1
Present Day Unknown,
Canada.
There was nothing quite like being attacked unannounced. The
surprise of being hit without seeing it coming made it just a bit more painful.
There would be a tiny moment of pure shock, when your heart nearly burst and
your brain halted in an attempt to look
back on what had just happened to determine what exactly it was. The
shock, the confusion and the pain, made the experience all the more unpleasant.
Ryan spat out the grime and muck that had entered his mouth as he was slammed
down face-first to the ground. The man who had performed this very unpleasant
act was standing over him and smirking smugly, holding up his fists in
preparation of Ryan's countermove. He had caught the boy off guard, and had
slammed his fist into the back of his head, sending him tumbling forward into
the mud. Ryan growled, agitated at having been attacked unannounced and for no
apparent reason. He jumped to his feet and charged the larger man head-first,
tackling him to the ground. A crowd began to brew around the fighting pair as
he drove hisfists like hammer into the ugly man's face. Anger was bubbling
beneath the surface, and nothing could stop him now that he wasin motion.“Hey!
Quit it!” The guards were trampling through the small crowd, their body armor
giving them great leverage. Twomen in black armor with tasers strapped to their
hips restrainedRyan, pulling him into a lock and yanking him off the bloodied man lying in an unconscious heap on the ground. Two others tended
to the unconscious man as he was dragged off to await punishment. Ryan
struggled against the guard's grasp. He hated to be manhandled, and he knew
that whatever punishment they dealt out would be unjust and cruel. It wasn't his
fault the fight had started. The other man had thrown the first punch. He was
just staring listlessly out through the barbed-wire fence at the silent forest
when he was attacked. “Let me go!” he cried out, snarling and flailing about.
The men had a firm grasp under his arms, hindering his general movement. Anger
was stirring inside his gut, and it only angered him more to think he was not
going to win this battle. He never did. The guards stripped him down and threw
him into the Dungeon, a dark murky room with no lights or windows and only a
bucket to use as a bathroom. They tossed him into the cold dark room and locked
the door behind him before he could turn and try to run. He shivered, his naked
body reacting to the temperature. The room was made specifically to be cold in
order to 'properly' punish the delinquents. But due to the prisoners' increased
body heat, they had to adjust the conditioners to an extremely low temp for it
to truly effect the punished. Ryan slammed his fist into the metal door with a
bark, not caring that he'd most likely broken a finger or two. It would heal in
an hour, as would the gash on the back of his head. The wounds always heal. Be
it an hour or two or three they healed to near perfection. Not a scar marred
his flesh, except the mangled mark that ran between his shoulder and neck. He
tenderly touched the scar on his neck as he turned and slunk down against the
wall, ignoring the hot pain grating against his back as he did so. The scar was
a large red gape in his flesh that ran from the end of his shoulder up to his
neck and down to just a few inches above his nipple. It was all he would ever
keep in this hell. He lost everything the day he gained this mark. His family,
his friends, his home; they were all gone. He had been taken away from his
family nearly two years ago. After being attacked by a large animalistic
creature he was brought by a team of those bastard guards to this horrid place.
At the time, neither he nor his family understood why he was being taken away,
and were outraged to find out he was to be taken. He had fought tooth and nail
to escape the men in black armor, but they had tasered him and left him
unconscious until he found himself on the inside of a white van speeding across
the country to this camp. Confused and terrified, he had tried to reason with
them – telling them he shouldn't be here. He'd run up to every guard or
scientist he saw and pleaded that it was a mistake. He wasn't one of those. He
was just attacked by a...That had eluded him for a time. What he had seen that
night was a monster, a terrible creature that was unfit to walk this earth. It
had bitten him, leaving behind this glaring scar in the crook of his neck. His
lips peeled back in disgust. It was confirmed the next full moon that what they
believed him to be was what he really was. He had been locked away in a cage
under the building alongside other cages filled with the other men and women of
this place. Ryan had yelled, cried, and begged to be let free. He knew what was
to come. The people around him were resigned to what lay ahead, some looking at
him with interest, as if they had seen this a hundred times before. He had
feared he'd be in danger with all of these monsters around him. But he shouldn't
have worried, for when the moon came around he, too, fell and began to Change.
Limbs and skin ripping and tearing into something that he could never accept.
Something he'd fear for the rest of his life.
A werewolf...
As he adjusted his weight against the cold, hard stone wall
he scowled at the memory of waking up to find he had gone on a similar rampage
as the rest of the room's occupants. He was a werewolf. Infected by the disease
that had swept the Nations in a flurry of fur and fang .Forever cursed, forever
alone. Ryan sighed as he closed his eyes and tried to sleep. But itwas too
hard, for his skin prickled and his nose caught the scent of the bucket in the
corner. He groaned and slammed his hand against the wall again. They called this place a rehabilitation
center, but the camp was more a prison than anything else. The dark room he was
trapped in was a common punishment in prison systems, known as the “Hole.” The
guards outside fondly referred to it as a“Dungeon” for its similarity to the
prisons they kept people in under castles in medieval times. He had only been
thrown in this place three times, excluding this one. The first time was upon
his arrival when he punched out a guard in shock. He hadn't known why he was
here, and he had still believed strongly that he wasn't a werewolf. They threw
him in here and he puked at the strange smells that invaded his nose. The
second and third times were both because of fights. Here in the camp there
wasn’t much to do during recess – a designated time where the subjects, as the
scientists preferred to call them, are allowed to roam a confined space outside
to keep themselves in shape – other than fight. He had been, and still was, a
favorite among the crowd to fight for the simple fact that he was so young.
Most of the men were in their thirties or forties, as well as the women. He
though was only nineteen, and as such was seen as an easier target for their
brutality. Ryan ran his hand over the stubble of shaved hair atop his head and
snorted, half in spite and half to try and get rid of the foul taste of dirt
from his mouth. What had he done to deserve this? Of all the things he had done
in life, what was it that sent him here? What made him what he is and why?
I'll never know...
and that's my downfall.
Authors Bio:
Michael Loring was born in Bristol,
Connecticut, but has lived in a variety of places such as Florida and
Tennessee. He likes to think of himself as an amateur Lycanthropologist,
studying werewolves ever since he was eight years old when he first saw An
American Werewolf In London. He spent most of his life switching between home
school and public school, always focusing on his passion of writing no matter
what. His interest in writing was sparked in the second grade when his teacher
encouraged him to write short stories for the class, earning him more than one
award at school assemblies for Creative Writing.
He currently resides back in his birthplace of
Connecticut with a house full of women who like to drive him up the wall until
he finishes his chores. Though they seem to avoid him during the night of the
full moon for some unexplainable reason…He can be found on Facebook, Twitter, Goodreads, Blog, The Writers Voice, and Amazon.
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